3 comments on “Deuteronomy

  1. Dear poet:
    Realized if I was going to criticize I should write something and be open for feedback as well. So I have done so as a first draft spur of the moment exercise. I loved. Not overly good at writing it though:I cast a stone with a feathered grace,
    To cast a glance at semantics chore;
    The castle is strong with a magical tilt,
    I am swept along on the rhythm and beat.

    A Community gathers to paint words upon the sky,
    As we sit all alone in the crowds on our Thrones.

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