Two Poems of Rain
I follow her down
Within every rain drop
is a reflection of the Sea.
through mountain meadow
through rolling river
she finds her way to the Sea
and I wonder if
within the mountain meadows,
within the rolling rivers
If I may also see
the reflection of the sea
I follow her down_
Night Storm
Rain
smells sweet
taps tempestuously
follows the thunder
before the breeze
asks for nothing
goes about its business
into the night.
smells sweet
taps tempestuously
follows the thunder
before the breeze
asks for nothing
goes about its business
into the night.
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July 14, 2011 at 5:54 pm
Both of these are lovely… I am drawn to the first a bit more… might be the personification in it… making you want to follow “her”…
August 2, 2011 at 3:27 pm
Thanks, Samanthamj, somewhere there is a zen proverb ” in every grain of sand is a reflection of the Universe”. and with some other thoughts… I like how the poem came out.
August 4, 2011 at 3:17 pm
Very nice, I love rain, the ocean, rivers, water in general… Your site is also gorgeous/very rich
August 18, 2011 at 5:18 am
Thanks! in the ancient collected text “Tao te Ching”: Water is symbolically soft. and softness is strength.
January 22, 2012 at 12:50 pm