29
Mar
09

Rainstorm odors

Best read with someone blowing into a jug

rain-beatRainstorm odors

All the senses take over

All my troubles

that consume

are washed away

In the damp perfumes

Of the impending down pour

,

Storm blows through

And the sun is peeking through

the sun warms the dew

and I’m thinking of you

I need the new perfume

All the senses take over

And be right over

heading for your stormy ways.


3 Responses to “Rainstorm odors”


  1. April 4, 2009 at 1:27 am

    Interesting metaphor

  2. 2 Gunjan Jain
    April 9, 2009 at 1:39 pm

    v nice
    beautiful.


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