18
Jul
08

these woods

these woods

I have protected these woods
for as long as i can remember
the rains drops of April
to the leaf fall of September
The secret trees have grown
and I’ve defended their splendor.

But I could not have predicted
my woods sparked into a blaze
but the random storm lightening
leaving darkness,smoke and haze
And i was cast out of Walden
left with nothing but dismay.

With no living timber to guard
With only dead ash to defend
I could see no real purpose
No meaning to comprehend
I wondered if , like my Walden
I too should meet an end.

Whether provoked by perfumes
Or a feeling deep inside
I really don’t remember
But my eyes opened wide
And began walking towards
the foreign horizon with each stride

I walked through the tall grass
over the flowering landscape
then I stopped to watch the herrings
fishing on over a blue lake
In my woods i never saw them
my woods had never had a lake.

And i looked at the flowers
and I looked the tall grass
And i realized tall woods
That were so guarded from trespass
Had blocked off the sun
From new splendors in the past.

Leaving behind me-as-defender
In the past smoky ash haze
I have become the explorer
New landscapes i will blaze
The world is to be discovered
With infinite pathways.


3 Responses to “these woods”


  1. July 20, 2008 at 6:24 am

    Well now what thoughts are these, and while you are discovering the new [to you] world beyond Walden will be renewing itself, but it’s screen will be for a later generation.

  2. July 21, 2008 at 4:48 pm

    I was sure that I also said I enjoyed reading, it’s very thoughtful and has a freshh perspective

  3. 3 chris
    July 21, 2008 at 7:37 pm

    Thank you Gentle Love. Most poems take me 15 minutes to write. took a week and a half of obsessing to finish it. Never been happy with it. but its not my worst.

    Hey why can’t i get your thumbnail to show up? youll just have to keep commenting here until your new avatar shows uo ;)


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